Thursday, 5 January 2017

just you and me

You and me... 

Just you and me...

Falling apart but you still together as my better half,

Bond we share,

The way you care,

Leave around my sadness nowhere,

You are the reason what I am today..,

You are the reason of What I will be tomorrow....,

When you are around,

My happiness profound,

Postive energy that surround,

And your splendid eyes..oh yeah..I wish in them I could drown,

But hatred that's surround turn green to brown,

For whom love is just matter of throne n crown,......

Haters gonna hate,

Lovers gonna love, 

Hope there is world where just LOVE exists,

Where just you and me exists,

Beyond everything,

Beyond anything,

Just you and me..........

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165 comments:

  1. Unknown5 January 2017 at 08:17

    Amazing ;)
    Keep up the good work.

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  2. V.5 January 2017 at 08:29

    nice work

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  3. Unknown5 January 2017 at 08:30

    NYC job

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  4. Unknown5 January 2017 at 08:37

    Great work👍

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  5. Unknown5 January 2017 at 08:39

    Nice 👍

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  6. Unknown5 January 2017 at 08:42

    Nicely written.. good ..keep it up ��

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  7. Unknown5 January 2017 at 08:43

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  8. Unknown5 January 2017 at 08:44

    Worth reading . so simply expressed (y)

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  9. Akriti5 January 2017 at 08:55

    Sooo deep❤ Awsum work dear👏🏻👏🏻👌🏻👌🏻

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  10. Ashu5 January 2017 at 09:02

    Great job....!!

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  11. Unknown5 January 2017 at 09:06

    Amazing poem..
    Keep going.

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  12. Unknown5 January 2017 at 09:07

    Simple language and nicely written :-)

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  13. Unknown5 January 2017 at 09:12

    Nice work.Truly worth reading

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  14. Unknown5 January 2017 at 09:13

    great work..❤ nicely written

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  15. Unknown5 January 2017 at 09:18

    Heart touching..
    This is just starting.
    Keep going.����

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  16. Unknown5 January 2017 at 09:25

    Wow!! Impressive 😉😉

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  17. Unknown5 January 2017 at 09:30

    Nyc poetry

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  18. Unknown5 January 2017 at 09:45

    Nothing I could have read better than this
    Impressive nd keep going! !

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    1. Sunayna Sharma5 January 2017 at 10:20

      well prashant your praise means a lot to me swaggy..thanks

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  19. Unknown5 January 2017 at 09:46

    Impressive sunayna.Hope to read more of your blogs in future.😄

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  20. Unknown5 January 2017 at 09:53

    Lovely 😍
    Keep it up👍😊

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  21. Unknown5 January 2017 at 10:05

    Kha c chapa����...apart frm jk's..nyc work ...appreciated

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  22. Unknown5 January 2017 at 10:07

    THAT WZ AUSM!KEEP IT UP!

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  23. Unknown5 January 2017 at 10:12

    Nice piece of work...Keep it up��

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  24. Unknown5 January 2017 at 10:12

    Wow...great lines ma'am����

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  25. Unknown5 January 2017 at 10:20

    ❤

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  26. Unknown5 January 2017 at 10:25

    Impressive!!!
    Keep it up.

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  27. Unknown5 January 2017 at 10:26

    Well written

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  28. Unknown5 January 2017 at 10:34

    Really nice!:)

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  29. Unknown5 January 2017 at 10:34

    Really nice!:)

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  30. Unknown5 January 2017 at 10:41

    Awesome yrrr.....keep up the good work....

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  31. WalkingIntoThePitAGAIN5 January 2017 at 10:49

    Nice piece of work... Keep going

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  32. Hannaan Malik5 January 2017 at 10:50

    Deep. Keep making me proud. Keep writing.

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  33. Unknown5 January 2017 at 10:51

    This is soo lovely ������
    Written beautifully

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  34. Jaquen Hagar5 January 2017 at 10:56

    Really beautiful����

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  35. Arpit5 January 2017 at 10:57

    nice :-)

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  36. Sushen Radotra5 January 2017 at 10:57

    Great work Sunayna

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  37. Unknown5 January 2017 at 11:11

    Amazing work with lovely lines
    Keep it up :-)

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  38. Unknown5 January 2017 at 11:13

    Nice work... Keep it up girl

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  39. Unknown5 January 2017 at 11:22

    I told u earlier only that u had this amazing talent in u and nice poem all the best for your future work waiting....

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  40. GuKhaLo5 January 2017 at 11:26

    Great one Sunayna! Deep and Dill se...

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  41. Unknown5 January 2017 at 11:31

    Wow that was simply awesome
    Great work

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  42. Unknown5 January 2017 at 11:38

    Gud work ��

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  43. Unknown5 January 2017 at 16:55

    Well said Sunayna :)

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  44. Parushi Sharma5 January 2017 at 20:31

    fab lines..😍

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  45. Unknown5 January 2017 at 21:41

    Wow!
    Read something amazing after a long time..!! Good work 😘

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  46. RAHUL VERMA5 January 2017 at 22:04

    thatss'gr8 ��..
    Keep it up ����

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  47. Sunayna Sharma5 January 2017 at 22:23

    thank u

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  48. chito5 January 2017 at 22:37

    Amazing work ..

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  49. Unknown5 January 2017 at 22:41

    Lovely lines...

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  50. Unknown5 January 2017 at 22:45

    U have the correct knowledge of words,emotions & feelings....
    Some lines were bang onn..👌
    Keep writing...😁
    All d best👍...waiting for the next one...!!😀

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    1. Sunayna Sharma5 January 2017 at 22:51

      thank u so much..for appreciating this much...for sure

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  51. Unknown5 January 2017 at 22:48

    Nice one sunayna..
    Keep up the good work..!!��

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  52. Unknown5 January 2017 at 22:48

    Nice one sunayna..
    Keep up the good work..!!��

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  53. Unknown5 January 2017 at 22:50

    Nice lines to express love

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  54. Unknown5 January 2017 at 22:52

    Nice"

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  55. Unknown5 January 2017 at 22:54

    Amazing composition,
    Very smoothly written, one can feel the emotions attached to it. Good keep up the good work ☺️

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  56. Unknown5 January 2017 at 22:59

    Flawless!!
    Great work :)

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  57. Jigyasa5 January 2017 at 23:05

    Very nice work �� lots of emotions in single masterpeice ��

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  58. Jigyasa5 January 2017 at 23:06

    Very nice work �� lots of emotions in single masterpeice ��

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  59. prateek ramani5 January 2017 at 23:09

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  60. prateek ramani5 January 2017 at 23:12

    impressive work !!

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  61. Unknown5 January 2017 at 23:15

    Amazing work 👍😊

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  62. Unknown5 January 2017 at 23:29

    Well done...well descirbed

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  63. Unknown5 January 2017 at 23:41

    Beautiful poem

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  64. Unknown6 January 2017 at 00:25

    Wow!
    Nice efforts in an awesome direction...
    Btw to whom is this dedicated to?

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    1. Sunayna Sharma6 January 2017 at 00:30

      thank u
      its been for someone special

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    2. Unknown6 January 2017 at 03:22

      Ohhh! Okay u don't wanna tell...
      But this is an amazing piece of emotions wrapped into words and presented here.
      All the best for future and keep it up.

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  65. Codes Alchemy6 January 2017 at 00:28

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  66. Nehan Rehman6 January 2017 at 00:34

    Lovely Lines!
    Keep up the good work..

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  67. Unknown6 January 2017 at 00:43

    nyc!

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  68. Unknown6 January 2017 at 00:43

    Very nice :)

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  69. Unknown6 January 2017 at 00:44

    Very nice :)

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  70. Unknown6 January 2017 at 00:48

    Very nice..☺

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  71. Unknown6 January 2017 at 00:50

    Very nice..☺

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  72. Unknown6 January 2017 at 00:51

    Very nice..☺

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  73. Unknown6 January 2017 at 01:07

    Good job ��

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  74. Unknown6 January 2017 at 03:18

    Heart touching.....
    Speechless

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  75. Shubham6 January 2017 at 03:22

    Wow sis...great work..👏🏻👏🏻👌👌😍😍

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  76. Unknown6 January 2017 at 05:01

    Good job!

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  77. Unknown6 January 2017 at 05:30

    Very smoothly expressed😃
    Heart touching😄
    Great work👏

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  78. Sunayna Sharma6 January 2017 at 06:02

    Thank u anushka

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  79. SR6 January 2017 at 06:15

    Pretty good! :)

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  80. Hitesh Gupta6 January 2017 at 07:38

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  81. Hitesh Gupta6 January 2017 at 07:39

    NICE :)

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  82. Unknown6 January 2017 at 22:07

    In one word.... TOUCHED...

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  83. Unknown7 January 2017 at 19:37

    Nice one Sunayna ,keep it up!☺️

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  84. Unknown12 January 2017 at 11:22

    Great.

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  85. RS14 January 2017 at 09:04

    Great poem.Keep it up.

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